from Professor’s comments, bring the final phase of this project to fruition wit
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from Professor’s comments, bring the final phase of this project to fruition with a quality deliverable. I encourage you to review the formatting for headers. You should review any opportunities to add headers and sub-headers that correctly illustrate the material and improve flow. Below is information on header formation from the OWL website that could be helpful (APA 7th edition). Lastly, remember that no headers should be left at the bottom of a page, which interferes with flow and readability.
APA Headings
Level Format
1 Centered, Boldface, Title Case Heading
The text starts a new paragraph.
2 Flush left, Boldface, Title Case Heading
The text starts a new paragraph.
3 Flush Left, Boldface Italic, Title Case Heading
The text starts a new paragraph.
4 Indented, Boldface Title Case Heading Ending With a Period. Paragraph text continues on the same line as the same paragraph.
5 Indented, Boldface Italic, Title Case Heading Ending with a Period. Paragraph text continues the same line as the same paragraph.
Please note that I do not check all references and citations for authenticity, but I do spot-check in each assignment. For clarification, any concept that is not your original idea or conclusion drawn must be cited. Citation is not synonymous with direct quotes. It is appropriate and expected that paraphrasing is used to illustrate understanding, application, and critical thinking skills. Also, remember that citations and references must be aligned. In your submission, there are concerns about assertions in a couple of sections that were not cited. Acronyms should also be spelled out with first use.
Keep in mind, when writing, the abstract for the final paper, you should include objectives, methods, findings/results. Abstracts are a 200-250 words synopsis of the paper (word count is only a guide, longer is acceptable if needed to meet expectations). The abstract is generally written last after the paper is completed. Please ensure the material summarized is in alignment with the content. Good job on your abstract in this draft, see comments on the draft. The introduction should include background information that leads to a purpose/thesis statement (see rubric). The strong thesis statement and clear focus/scope are factors significant for a strong introduction. Remember that the main discussion points in the body of the paper should be covered as they appear in the introduction. The introduction will need some work to meet expectations. The conclusion should summarize research findings and address implications. New ideas or sources should not be introduced for the first time in the conclusion. Review the conclusion after making any adjustments to the paper.
Technical –:
1. I did not grade general grammar, spelling, and punctuation harshly since this phase of the course project/paper is a draft. Please make sure to review again for the final. 1st person should be avoided.
2. APA formatting, to include running heads, citations, and references, ….
upd: Professor: Correct. The idea is to polish the draft.
